Flordalis at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

16/05/2008

Winston's Poem is very descriptive

I found a poem in Space, Issue #2 by Winston

I liked the poem, Where I’m From because it gave a a lot of detail.

One part that stood out for me is: “the trees die with their branches drooping down depressingly.” I think this is descriptive because you can picture it in your mind.

Another part that stood out to me was: “Andres plays his most faved instrument, The Saxophone, and Gladys sews endlessly, making a new creation after the next.” This stood out for me because it was interesting.

I look forward to seeing what Winston makes next, because he gave alot of detail and you can picture everything that he wrote in your mind by the way he described it.