Flordalis at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

09/06/2008

Kristy's poem about "Spring" rhymes

I found a poem in Space #3 by Kristy.

I liked Kristy’s poem, “Spring,” because it rhymed.

One part that stands out for me is: “Walking down the road, Getting very wet, I start to run as fast as a jet.” I think this is weird because why would you run if it’s raining?

Another part that stood out was: “Green grass is beginning to Pop Out, That makes me want to shout!” This stood out for me because I agree, spring is an exciting season because plants start to grow and stuff.

I look forward to seeing what Kristy makes next, because she wrote a good poem.