Flordalis at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

Danielle's Poem, Darkness was descriptive

I found a poem in Space #3 by Danielle.

I liked the poem “Darkness” because it’s interesting.

One part that stood out for me is: “I try to wake up, but my eyes won’t open, I want to see the daylight again.” I think this is cool because it sounds like you’re having a nightmare or something and it’s descriptive.

Another part that I liked was: “I travel through the dark tunnel and see a bright light, this could be heaven.” This stood out for me because it’s like you escaped darkness and now your in the light.

I look forward to seeing what Danielle makes next, because her poem was interesting and descriptive.